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Ananda's avatar

Delicious language, I love this!

gabby's avatar

thank you, ananda! obsessed with that description :’)

Caleb's avatar

Loved the intimacy of it and I love how you made it sound so breathless in a good way, like words between gentle kisses

gabby's avatar

thank you caleb! i liked playing around with this form :)

Caleb's avatar

It’s like one minute you’re thinking and then boom a kiss and now you’re lost in thought struggling to comprehend the moment

gabby's avatar

yess the aphasia that often happens during intimacy. i’m obsessed with that concept

Caleb's avatar

Didn’t that concept had such a cool name